Shoot the Moon, by Billie Letts

Cover ImageFinished 3-9-09, rating 3.5/5, fiction, pub. 2004

“That’s why I came here.  I want Gaylene Harjo to tell me her side of the truth.”

“She can’t do that.”

“She can’t or she won’t?”

Teeve leaned forward, reached across the table and put her hand on top of his, but he pulled free of her touch.

“Gaylene’s dead.”

She waited for some response, watched for a reaction, but could see nothing more than the muscles clenching in his jaw.

“She was murdered.  The same night you disappeared.”

Chapter 5

Mark Albright, a Beverly Hill veterinarian, has come to DeClare, Oklahoma looking for his birth mother.  Only after the recent death of his father did he learn that he had been adopted and his mother’s name was Gaylene Harjo.  Once in the small Oklahoma  town of his birth he finds that he and his birth mother are at the heart of a 30 year old mystery.   His birth name was Nicky Jack and he was presumed dead when he was 10 months old.

The town is full of quirky characters and villainous men.  The stoner Kyle, abuser O Boy, and the helpful Teeve all bring Mark closer to the truth of the murder and his father’s true identity.  He also finds himself drawn to his very pregnant cousin, Ivy, and he is able to help her understand the repurcussions of  her own pregnancy.

The story grabbed be from the very start and I was entertained all the way through.  There were so many interesting characters and the charm of small town life made this a fast and fun read.  The mystery of the murder itself was not that hard to figure out, but Mark’s true father was a surprise (and disappointment) to me.

The story had so much potential and for the most part it delivered, but at the end there were still too many unanswered questions.  And it was missing depth for me.  Mark was a little too cool for me to really understand.

This is the first time I’ve read Billie Letts and I look forward to reading more.

A Gentle Rain, by Deborah Smith

Cover ImageFinished on 1-20-09, rating 4/5, fiction, pub. 2007

Shakey pointed a fake finger at me.  “You and that scar-faced mare?  You’re racin’ for all of us who are missin’ a part or two.  You probably won’t win, but at least you’ll get in the game.  You’re proof that God needs even the angels who are missin’ a wing.”

Chapter 20

Kara was raised as one of the elite.  Worth millions, with powerful friends in all the right places, she always felt inferior to her very successful relatives.  When her parents die she discovers she had been adopted and decides to find her bith parents.  Mac and Lily are still together and living on the Thocco Ranch.  Kara changes her name and heads to Florida where she ingratiates herself into the lives of everyone at the ranch. 

Ben Thocco has come up the hard way.  Born dirt poor he lost his parents at a young age and had to escape to Mexico with his younger brother so the courts would not separate them.  Now, in his late 30’s, he is a successful Florida ranch owner still caring for his younger brother who suffers from Down’s Syndrome and a serious heart condition.  His ranch hands are special needs adult who contribute to the ranch and form a makeshift family of society’s outcasts. 

This story of mentally challenged adults and a love between two people who need each other really touched me.  The theme of being different and being loved and accepted anyway is one that we should all be reminded of from time to time.  The book drew me in because of the people, but there was also so much story to tell.  Ben is fighting to save his ranch and his brother’s life and Kara is trying to come to terms with her wealth and what is best for her birth parents. 

I thought the last section of the book had more story than it really needed and I wish I could say more, but it might spoil it.  The end was too tidy and that is the only reason this didn’t rate higher for me. 

This book will appeal to many people.  Jane Austen fans will love the quotes sprinkled throughout the book.  Floridians, ranchers, and horse racing fans will enjoy the story.  Anyone interested in the emotional impact of finding out you’re adopted will not be disappointed.  And, of course, anyone who has someone in their life that is different will appreciate the story of the Thocco Ranch.